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Spinning, arms spread
Crushing the tops of mountains
With my hands
As I dive into the Pacific
I flood the shorelines

Excerpt from "It was Fear of Myself that made me Odd" by Alexisonfire

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EDIT: So, this is the final one, but I'm uploading the old one without *mondeis's character, I'm just going to make it a plain white wolf. That way they'll be seperate.

Not sure if this will have any more updates or fixes but you never know. ;)

BTW, the other wolf is my fersona. :D


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My contest entry for :iconmondeis:

Water splash brushes by *FrozenStarRo and ~superlibbie


View animation/walk-through here: [link]


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Snow Leopard © *mondeis
Brown Wolf © me
Art © me

Critiques


:iconjskra:
Also, I have to write some critique, I hope it'll help you for next time. ^^"

So, I LOVE the water waves and water sparkling on it's feets. I really LOVE this effect, you have to show me how you did it.
But if you did the water so, you could do whole water, and not the piece of sand on the bottom, it's little unreal. Also, the sand is little too dark, and there are no waves flowing to the sand. You could lighten the sand little, because of the light of the sun.
The light of the sun on the wolf and water is little strange, going of the hybride's belly.

For the highlight on the mountain, you could do the light around the sun, on the mountain bigger.

The mountain and the land in the deep is little unreal, too.

And you forgot the mirror reflection of this hybride. :P

But I love how you did the hybride. I said this to you on the ustream. I love this really. His fur was amazing, and theese markings of a leopard, just amazing.
This water is just perfect, as I said.
The mirror refections of the mountain and the land is great.
I think you did a wonderfull job here, really.
Even of this critique, I LOVE this artwork. It has so much peace here, and something more...
Congratulations, Sugar. :3
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This is a really magical and beautiful piece from Sugarpoultry, she's very talented artist and this is yet another masterpiece from her. Her fur detailling skills are amazing; the fur and it's markings look realistic and smooth, and the colours on the fur have a nice almost unnoticeable variety. Surroundings are well done too, though not as well done at all as the character. Splashes in the water and the mountain's reflection look both highly realistic and have much detail. But the actual background (=trees and mountains) look boring and two dimensional, which is a shame as everything else has so much details.
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:iconlordkibadinu:
:o Looks very nice ;)

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:iconsaxgirl1010:
1. I LOVE Alexisonfire. :heart:
2. I love this, too. The water looks like you used a splatter brush, yet it's so realistic! I also like how you incorporated the spots. Nice job. :)

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:iconmondeis:
That looks really beautiful! I'm so glad you chose one of my songs :D I love the soft colours in this, it makes it seem very calm and makes me wish I were there. His fur is so pretty, too :heart: Thanks for entering! :hug:
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Love the water aswell. <3
:iconjmillart:
This is great!

The reflection is wonderful and adds a lot of beauty to the piece.

I hope you win!

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:iconsugarpoultry:
Thank you for posting it! I'm gonna take the advice of the critiques and update it. I hope that's not a problem? Should only be a few re-uploads.

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:iconsugarpoultry:
Yah, I don't usually use brushes this much, but they really can be useful! haha ;)

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:iconkovowolf:
Very nice entry :> but arn't you also supposed to include one of your characters too?

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:iconthesilvermist:
wow this is stuning hope you do well in the contest ^^

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